Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers
There is a question why many people participate in life-threatening sports. In this essay, I will consider some reasons for this phenomenon and give recommendations on how to avoid dangerous moments.
Let us start with motives why this type of sports is so popular. The first reason is that it often seems to fill life with excitement and entertainment. Many people complain that their life has become both ordinary and tasteless, but with the help of extreme sports they say that they feel well again. Another reason is that many risk-takers gain popularity through life-threatening sports. Many extreme sports involve putting life in danger, so it attracts a great deal of spectators, which make the stunt performer famous.
However, there are some ways of diminish danger to people from such type of sports. Firstly, the government should install safer playgrounds, which usually eliminate the possibility of damage to different parts of body and audience, because they would include no dangerous elements, such as sharp corners. Secondly, officials should explain detrimental consequences of risky sports. If authorities educate people about possible damage on TV, few people would stay alive as well as avoid either fractures or breaks.
In conclusion, even though there are many valid reasons why many people put their life at danger, I think that if the government takes the above mentioned suggestions, more people avoid the opportunity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34934497817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89239920981 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8025357948 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344145119807 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116027635032 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072497978186 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205633356802 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240219600048 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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