Some think that buildings should be constructed with functionality in mind, as it is more important than design. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Designs of the buildings are generally associated with culture and art prevail in society and this can be seen by examine the different structures built in the world. Ignoring this concept, some people believe that functionality should always be kept in mind while completing a building as the goal of every constructed building is to be used by people for various purposes. I agree with this and explain the reason for it.
People who emphasis on the pattern of structure have some valid points. Firstly, buildings reflect the mood of the society and even after many years it tells the story of the time & living trend of the society. Many historical building exhibit itself the unique values and activities of that time. For example, RedFort in Delhi has peculiar design and talks about the stone carving, different shape play round, open theater, in house musical room and have more resemblance with Arab culture.
However, there is no doubt that every famous building is known for its usages and functions which provides different facility and luxury to its stakeholder. People use these building for numerous purposes and do not even talk about ecstatic aspects such as shape, color, interiors etc. For instance, Bukingam palace in London is not known for its design but many people come to see the palace and still king and queen of London reside in palace and it also used for purposes such as exhibition, organizing camp for immigrants and musical shows.
To conclude, design of building contributes in ecstatic aspects which are key consideration while constructing the building but everyone at the end wants to use for a purpose. Therefore, functionality aspects of the structure are more valuable than design.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay round, open theater, in house musical room and have more resemblance with Ara...
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Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd, open theater, in house musical room and have more resemblance with Arab cult...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07394366197 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60214178895 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1516601784 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229538362429 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090183100265 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649356325088 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151797843376 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812835374505 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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