According to a few individuals, change in climate effect negatively on businesses. Others believe that every problem comes with an equal or greater opportunity so, they consider this problem as a good chance for business. This essay is about to discuss both the sides before reaching to the conclusion.
There are several problems when climate-change reforms, first and the foremost one is in the availability of resources. Heatwave, draught and too much rain effect the agriculture business, where the raw material is produce. Less production of raw material increase the price of product and this can drag the country to the recession. Turning to the other negative effect, extreme weather events make the working conditions more harsher. As weather pattern changes, it become more challenging for those people who are physical labour, specially how to workers. even this will increase the company's expense behind the safety tools.
As far as opportunities are concerned, to overcome the global warming problem green business model is introduced. In this model companies produce eco-friendly vehicles; food; fashion wear and other goods. Evidence for this is proved by Elon musk. Hi successful runs companies like Tesla and space-x. Tesla manufactures electric cars to stop carbon emission. It follows that, To generate more eco friendly energy use solar; windmill and biogas, instead of using coal and fuels. This is eco-friendly energy pops up chance to establish small startup and even a multi billion business.
In my perspective, weather change reforms remains a negative factor, but it can be opportunity for business. Just people need to change their attitude towards the problems to find the profitable solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harsher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harsher
...ther events make the working conditions more harsher. As weather pattern changes, it become ...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...harsher. As weather pattern changes, it become more challenging for those people who a...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...sical labour, specially how to workers. even this will increase the companys expense...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41481481481 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79481196808 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6758040493 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187016951548 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511629349884 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051335951534 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119011062357 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627966040105 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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