Over the last decades concerns about the environment has raised among a steadily growing number of people. Especially for the youngest generation, phenomena like global warming, air pollution, deforestation are more than just alarming words. Many have been taking on the street to give voice to an ecosystem they feel in danger. I believe that is vital to take effective actions now to give the future generations a clean and prosperous planet. In this essay I will briefly describe what are the foremost threats for our planet and what the current generation can do to avoid further damage.
There is no doubt that human activity is to great extent responsible for climate change. Exhaust emission. traffic jams, urban sprawl, gentrification and deforestation are only a part of the drawbacks linked to industrialization. Carbon dioxide has been proven as one of key agents causing green house effect, which is responsible for global warming. More and more acres of rain forests are cut to make room for intensive farming that through a heavy use of pesticides and chemical fertilizers aims to boost yields. The deployment of those substances have also been linked to water pollution, a source of lethal diseases like polio, dysentery and cholera. In addition to those already devastating effects, many animal species are on the brink e of extinction. Wild animals like elephants, tigers, lions or rhinos are in the crosshairs of ruhtlessness poachers who make profits by selling ivory and fur.
Fortunately, young generations are not insensitive to the cry of nature and thousands have become more and more involved in demonstrations and protests that have the aim to raise awareness of the threats facing endangered species and the environment. At this point, with a population of roughly eight billion individuals who need food, water and energy, this planet is in no shape to shoulder the costs of further uncontrolled exploitation of natural resources. The current generation has thus the responsibility to do something to stop climate change and little actions like cutting down on plastic, packages and car usage can generate profound benefits for the environment.
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- What will a typical day be like in 2050 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Traffic
...e for climate change. Exhaust emission. traffic jams, urban sprawl, gentrification and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, if, so, thus, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2435530086 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95622865401 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624641833811 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2871056859 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176670647331 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488253184954 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642667066669 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121340388481 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632558279528 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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