Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
There is a tendency among younger generation to move to urban areas; meanwhile the elderly are staying by themselves in rural communities. In this essay, I will examine complications caused by this trend and suggest possible solutions.
The main consequence of abandoning aged group of people in rural areas is their isolation and lack of social contact. Loneliness and social isolation in turn leads to serious health problems. For instance, some studies suggest that loneliness can be as damaging as smoking 15 cigarettes a day. In addition, seniors are facing a lack of nearby shops and services, as well as, lack of access to health and social care. Due to limited local bus services, old people struggle to reach shops, post offices or even hospitals. It is understood that all the issues mentioned above have a severe impact on people’s quality of life in older age.
To address the challenges related to the rural elderly, government should increase financing for rural communities and make sure that the older people who live in the countryside have access to the services and facilities they need to live as independent and fulfilling lives as possible. Additionally, a local bus service should be improved, extra routes and buses should be added providing freedom of movement for ageing population. To tackle an issue of isolation, it would be vital to extend fast broadband internet services to the most remote parts of the country. As well as this, local community centers should be open, where old people could meet and have social interactions and discussions of burning issues.
In conclusion, prevailing of older people in the villages is serious issue because it causes isolation and declining rural living standards. The key to solving these problems is sufficient funds and providing of local services, such as adequate health care system and fast internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1862745098 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79878446792 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8333096305 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208837295751 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661523098074 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476676064365 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118445876342 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198887528662 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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