Some young people are leaving the countrside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Some would argue that youngsters from all over the world are migrating from urban to rural areas to get a better quality of life, leaving behind the old population in the village. This essay will first discuss that the primary issue associated with this trend is decreasing in the agricultural outcome, then it will suggest that the most viable solution is to provide opportunities to the youngster in the countryside.
To embark with, as young people move to the metropolis, the elderly started feeling loneliness. In old age, people lose strength and energy so that they need someone to take care of themselves. This is to say, they want their progeny to spend more time with them, and hamper them physically and emotionally. For instance, due to the mass movement of youngsters to explore the world, old people are weak so that they are unable to cope with this gap. Therefore, if a partner died there is probability that the other one would suffer from depression and other psychological disorders.
On the other hand, the best solution to overcome this issue is government ought to offer the state of the art facilities to the youth in their villages. In other words, if there were more world-class universities to provide quality education to the locals, and open multi-national companies in the countryside then there would be fewer people wanted to settle in cities and towns. For example, such initiative was taken in Germany in 2017 to put barrage on the movement of masses from villages. When they establish an agricultural university in rural areas where students can learn latest techniques to get more farming turnout, the significant decrease in migration was observed.
To conclude, young masses living in small villages from all over the world are shifting to large cities leaving the older generation suffer from psychological disorders; however, this issue can be addressed by putting emphasis on the development of these areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
... issue is government ought to offer the state of the art facilities to the youth in their villag...
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Line 9, column 577, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'learn the latest'.
Suggestion: learn the latest
...rsity in rural areas where students can learn latest techniques to get more farming turnout,...
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Line 13, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asis on the development of these areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10559006211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77436980437 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4418012397 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227208826684 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742806142406 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508213693346 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137640646534 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311950782236 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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