Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in the world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.
International sports competitions have been helping since ancient times. Furthermore, some people believe that popular events like Olympic games and other sports occasions are crucial in easing international tensions and displaying patriotic emotions in a safe way. This essay will argue that sport can facilitate international tensions, however, it can increase advert feelings between hostile countries at the same time.
To begin with, the football world cup is one of the best ways to illustrate positive and friendly examples to the world. In the football world cup, people will gather in one country from all over the world. In other words, people from other countries, cultures, and religions will meet each other and gain more information regarding foreign traditions, which in turn, will help to reduce international tensions and patriotic emotions. Apart from that, football players can give a message to the world by shaking hands and wearing logos. It can be illustrated the World Cup 2010 where North Korea demonstrated friendly act against their opponent - South Korea. Therefore, sports events are peremptory in abbreviation international tensions and patriotic sentiments.
On the other hand, sports events can worse conditions and patriotic feelings between states. That is to say, that after matches there can be collisions between fans since one team can lose, as to why it will increase conflicts between the audience. For instance, games between Greece and Turkey are always intensive and there can be even deaths among spectators.
Taking all these points into consideration, it can be concluded that big sports occasions can drastically shorten multicultural and international tensions accompanied by patriotic sentiments reduction. Nevertheless, the government should carefully look after situations due to the fact that at the same time those events can dramatically explode feelings among countries.
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Suggestion: sentiments'; sentiment's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, as to, for instance, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64604810997 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92184708249 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7892800038 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895431223286 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392206094055 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030825635077 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530320988093 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383171367683 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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