Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How this could be changed?
Generations ago, teaching was considered an extremely well-respected job, and in some countries it is still true. Nevertheless, in many parts of the world throughout the last decade, there has been a sharp decline in the number of young people who want to become teachers. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.
One of the main causes of the problem is that teachers’ salaries are dramatically lower than in many other jobs on the market. In other words, teachers pay has not kept pace with that of other professions, such as law or medicine. It can be illustrated by the following example, that in the UK a solicitor with 5 years experience will earn far more than a teacher with the same experience. The solution is for the government to raise teachers pay significantly, which, in turn, would attract more outstanding young individuals into the profession.
Another tremendous problem is that many children do not behave well in class. That is to say, that teachers frequently have to deal with pupils who disobey them, which almost all the time causes them to give up teaching. This tends to put off potential teachers as well. To tackle this issue, parents should give their children a sense of respect for teachers, in order to influence on their disrespectful behavior in class.
Taking all these points into consideration, it can be concluded that teaching has become a drastically less popular job in many countries due to factors such as low salary and pupils offending behavior. Needless to say, that this is a serious problem, and unless we can get more talented young people to become teachers, the education of our children will suffer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, so, still, well, such as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95104895105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83784288539 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8694787935 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211763838979 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680624337339 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573229195754 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123673074494 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399468223621 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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