Stress is the main issue in the modern Society. Discuss the main factors causing stress in the modern Society.
We are living in an Environment, where money is attracting people. Money is the main cause of stress. There are many factors which are causing stress to take a hike in modern society. Below are the major factors which causes stress.
Giving preference to wealth than Health: Nowadays, people are lethargic. They do believe in earning but try to find an immediate source to get credits in their account. They do not believe in hard-earned Money. They end up causing issues to their health, which in turn helps to grow stress and eventually make them pessimist. Is not it a big issue in our society. People are even taught to create such an impression on the society which tend to suppress the poor.
Another reason which causes stress is "Prestige". In our society people always pay attention towards their honor. "Prestige" plays a vital role in one's life. Prestige is the main reason behind selfishness. One who is selfish, will always be alone. This will lead to an increase in the amount of stress one bears. For example, a person who runs a business, considering himself the sole owner and care-taker of it will always end up getting fewer opportunities. Fewer opportunities will lead to less productivity. Less productivity will not help him to grow his business. Eventually, he will stick at a place where he will tend to lose everything that he earned. Even, he may not be respected by the workers who works for him, as he may not be appreciating them for their work. At the end, he may suffer from Stress.
Hard work, though less wage rate is also one of the reasons behind stress. People work to fulfill their fundamental needs, which is Food, Shelter, Cloth. If they will need to opt between any of these three, they are not earning well, or they are getting paid inappropriately.
Stress today is the main reason for many suicide attempts taken place. People should not pay attention on things which may cause stress to him. And there should be proper Govt policies should be taken place or laws should be improved as per human welfare. As a human being I will be trying to approach our beloved, Prime Minister to take an action which would help in favor of Human Welfare. There should be changes in the behavior of human being towards each other, this will not only help in reducing the stress in our daily schedule but also help our society to become a better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ey do not believe in hard-earned Money. They end up causing issues to their health, ...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...os;Prestige' plays a vital role in ones life. Prestige is the main reason behin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79523809524 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80354084505 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0580923097 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4482758621 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4827586207 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41379310345 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214176876986 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731715888325 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117224570709 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148958322334 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152942241583 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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