Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that students had better afford all of their studying expenses since they are the beneficiaries of education from the university rather than society. I agree with the former statement but also encourage the benefits of society in studying.
On the one hand, students growing up being sent to schools and give their payment to be well educated. Inside the academic environment, students could learn the most basic principles in science and literature, which help to build a firm foundation for a higher level of knowledge as they reach further stages in studying. Furthermore, such a serious atmosphere in researching would provide scholars concentration and attempts to pursue their academic goals, which are extremely helpful in the upcoming career paths when they finish the studying curriculums.
On the other hand, society plays an important part in educating people. especially to the interns and those who have finished their degrees. While the university provides theoretically based knowledge, the social environment teaches us how to apply them in practical situations with more errors and trials. Additionally, the more students are trained in a realistic collision, the more they become experienced and determined, which cannot be a hundred percent comprehended from school. Finally, people spend years for self-accomplishment to reach maturity in society than in school, so that finding financial assistance while studying is widely supported nowadays.
In conclusion, education is one of the must pay categories to acquire knowledge, but obviously, what we learn from schools needs sharpening by our experience within society.
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In the oast when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they hace more opportunities to study abroad Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
... an important part in educating people. especially to the interns and those who have finis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, so, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55335968379 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05226389639 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656126482213 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0616483949 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.727272727 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21127384358 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740228671424 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519474783439 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13051419494 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727455193043 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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