A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extend do you agree or dissagree?
In this century, people giving more importance to money than ever. In this essay I will discuss both point of view and my opinion about this topic.
Nowadays, unfortunately money control everything from medicine to having a balanced life. To put in other way, without money you can't have actually a decent living. This controversial issue about the amount of money you have, can sometimes ruin your career if you can't control what is occur around you. However, being a successful person are not define by the money they earn per month or per year or what car they own. In other order, success is the result of your hard work, is the result of your sacrifice to get there. In light of the evidence of some studies, money can't bring you happiness, because you can't buy what really means in this life with them, for instance friends, love, peace. Furthermore spending too much time running after your financially situation, will cause a psychological instability.
Secondly, in my conception a successful person do not have to be rich to be successful. If their purpose is to find happiness and to help other, their work will always pays off. The secret of being succesful is being yourself, doing what actually enjoy doing, eating what you like to eat, going whatever you wanna go. Not only this will make them feel better but they also will make them humble and better person. Since we are kids we were asked : "What do you wanna be when you grow up?" in many occasion we end up with a completly different career than we actually said then and this is because we can not predict the future and we do what we think it is good at the time. Doing what you love will make your soul more healthy not to mention about your family stability
Above all, the real success in life is what is important to you and what you achive in your role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67405063291 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32426829968 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9616756365 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277463220062 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911123117595 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697419962195 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153693115805 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783708611516 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.