Sugar has become the most common ingredient in all the food items and has been excessively added in sodas, chocolate, pastries. As a result it has led to several health issues such as obesity, liver disorder and so on. Owing to this, several people opine that it is the responsibility of a Government authorities and other believe that it’s an individual choice for such intake. In my opinion, its’ an individual choice to avoid such food items.
Many believe that it’s the responsibility of the Government to tackle such issue by creating awareness, introducing regulation and by price hike. Government has a sole control over the pricing policy of the sugar in every country, price can be increased and can restrict its sale. Further, food regulation can be introduced by setting an standard measures for ingredients and finally public shall be made aware of demerits of sugar consumption . However there is very low scope by which people will be influenced by the above measures.
On the other hand, it is opined that it’s an individual responsibility to hold on consumption of such good food. Every person should keep a check on their sweet intake and do a regular exercise to be fit and strong. Further, every packaged foods and drinks consist of label which displays its’ ingredients. This helps to reconsider the purchase and accordingly can be avoided. This can help to reduce sucrose consumption to the maximum extent. Hence this has a greater impact as barrier are put on by oneself.
To conclude, I state that self help is the best help, hence avoiding such consumption should come from within, rather than from external regulations. This will help to have a good and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, hence, however, if, so, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10545454545 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85378474602 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6494936885 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116017100577 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382466181841 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423509661242 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693505333256 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038166259633 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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