In recent years we have seen a considerable increase in dangerous or extreme sports which needs high level of supervision. It is believed that rescuers should do their best to save the life and other consider not at the cost of their own life. In my opinion people indulging in such activity should help themselves rather than putting other life on line.
Although few consider that primary responsibility of the rescue team is to save the life of the people who are in dangerous situation. I believe it is unfair to rescue the one who are stuck because of their own wish, eventhough knowing the negative consequence of such act. As per the Canadian Atlantic research team, every year approximately 15-20 snow experts die while rescuing the tourist because of unforeseen snow storm. This can be avoided by restricting tourism to such places.
People are highly influenced to participate in those games which gives them sense of thrill and satisfaction. It helps to explore their own strength, to curb the threat of participant and rescuer life, there is a need if regulation and permissible standards to be adhered. In Mount everest, people including researchers are allowed to climb upto certain limit by walk and later on there is an mandatory instruction to use Helicopters for the safety of the life. Hence in this way we can avoid putting the life of rescuers to threat.
To summarise, it is important to know the level of risk associated with the extreme games as the life of both participant and rescuer can be saved with sensible steps. Hence i believe that who play such games, should help themselves rather than calling for others support.
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In recent years, people have
In recent years, people have started enjoying their life in different ways. They are creating their own bucket lists which are mostly consisting with various dangerous activities which might be pernicious to them. Nowadays, folks are participating in those games which are quite life threatening. Some suggests, individual should be responsible enough to take care their own life, other people such as rescuer should not save them by risking themselves. In my opinion, i firmly disagree with this view as i believe helping others is the best way to show the humanity. This essay is going to elucidate two important factors to justify why it is important to help each other. Among all, Humanity and benefit in business will be discussed here.
As a starting, humanity is one of the most imperative demeanor human possesses. Some folks might not show their humanity as they would like to live by themselves but there are another part of the society who always give their hand for helping others. When it comes to saving life, we should try our best to help those who are in trouble. Though individuals are choosing detrimental sports for enjoying, they would not be knowing whether they will in trouble or not. There are lot of other people who are also participating these games and they are safe. So it’s better to show our gratitude if they are in trouble. For example, scuba diving is the sport where oxygen cylinder might get damage; in that case we should help him/her to take out from the water. Another imperative thing is that recognition which many people look for. Recognition makes individual famous. This also encourage individual to do good thing in future.
In addition, there are another aspect of these games. These are one form of games where people are participating actively. if we think in business prospective, rescuer should always help their customer in case if they are in trouble. Most of the businesses are looking for more customers to grow their business. Hence, it would be beneficial if they have rescuer to help a customer. Another important focus of the business is that increasing revenue. They should have enough facilities to get the good revenue, one of them would be rescuer, by this way customer feels more confident. And, most masses will those where they feel more comfortable.
In Conclusion, I would say that people should not take part in those games where they are not confident enough. Though i have described why people should help, there are situations where individual need to take care by themselves. At the end of the day, it’s our life and we need to make sure that we are safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90391459075 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71779897641 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6745645553 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255662105533 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854467638094 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711937443289 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150744663678 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616549726255 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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