People doing dangerous sports like bungee jumping and scuba diving should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their live people.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days, people often love to experience risky sports to get their adrenaline rush. Some people say that individuals who indulge in such activities must take responsibility for their own lives rather than depending on rescue teams, in case of any emergencies. In my opinion, I completely agree with this point of view.
Some people might say that rescue workers are there for saving people and getting them out of any unforeseen circumstances and therefore they must take the responsibility of helping anyone in need. However, I believe their primary responsibility should rest with rescuing people who become the victims of some natural disaster, for example, fire, earthquake or floods. This is because people who choose to entertain themselves by risking their lives make an informed decision and are aware beforehand that anything can happen.
Therefore, people who choose to experience dangerous sports must take all the safety precautions and necessary training beforehand to minimize the chances of any adverse ramifications. For example, if one goes for rafting without wearing a life jacket, he himself is inviting trouble for himself, then why should rescue workers put their lives on risk for their irresponsible behavior? In addition, people who want to experience such life-threatening activates must also make sure to get all the required training beforehand, in order to enhance the probability of coping up with any extreme circumstances. For example, one should not go for scuba diving, unless he is comfortable being under water and knows the basics of swimming.
To recapitulate, I believe people who choose to entertain themselves by troubling themselves must own the responsibility for their own lives by gaining appropriate training and by using relevant safety equipment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43772241993 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01403529488 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7590890406 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32618498704 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126966767952 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651944090873 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208232444795 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320099603816 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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