Sugar is not good for health. Some people think that government is responsible for limiting the consumption of sugar. While others think that it is an individual who should be responsible for how much sugar he should eat. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Excessive use of sugar is detrimental for human body because of various health issues associated with it. It is often argued that intake of sugar is controlled by government authorities, while others believe that sugar consumption in daily diet should be regulated at personal interest. Through this essay, I shall put light on both the aspects and will explain why only individual efforts are more important.
There are certain reasons due to which people consider higher authorities responsible for reducing the use of sugar. Firstly, governments can impose heavy taxes on the sugar items and this leads to slower sale of these products. In Australia, for instance, it has been seen that after increasing the taxes on such products, people are avoiding these sugar products. Secondly, governments can arrange awareness campaigns to educate public about the ill effects of excessive use of them. A good illustration of this is that many people have been influenced by such campaign programs broadcasted by officials. Due to aforementioned reasons people tend to believe that governments can take preventive measures to control sugar in daily use.
On the contrary, it is believed that reduction of sugar intake in diet is feasible at the personal level. Every person has his own metabolic rate and they know their limitations about the sugar level. For example, a person can consume higher sugar in comparison to other and with the help of regular exercise he might regulate the sugar level in blood. In addition to this, one can change the routine diet plan and with strict check on sugar intake various diseases, due to malfunctioning of body organs, can be avoided. Hence, with the help of exercise and disciplined diet, sugar level in the body can be regulated.
In conclusion, the authorities can play an important role to reduce the consumption of sugar by imposing tax and awareness campaigning, however, I strongly believe that it can be controlled more effectively at individual level through proper workout and limited use of sugar in the diet.
- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and 73
- Sugar is not good for health Some people think that government is responsible for limiting the consumption of sugar While others think that it is an individual who should be responsible for how much sugar he should eat Discuss both the views and give your 42
- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13988095238 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79823796345 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9210211123 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315103830259 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113831745556 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670765679196 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200224652986 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450708423705 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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