Travel makes way to new dimension of life. Travelling is easier and comfortable in today's digital world than previous years in 1960's. Advantages of travelling are to learn new topics, make new friends, expertise in new culinary recipe, learn language, relax and rejuvenate.
Most importantly, Today's travel is like cutting a cake. With advent of mobile apps and new technologies, People plan their last minute travel and are able to visit places with affordable cost. In fact, there is variety of websites offering travel packages and people are impressed by their photograph and earlier review comments and photos. On one hand, people can inquire about their place of travel, stay of travel and restaurants in area of travel within few minutes before booking for tour. They finish a virtual tour with photos or videos uploaded by travelers who visited last week or month. On the other hand, last minute rush or peak season can be avoided by traveler by seeing reviews.
Also, People learn new topics related to area like coffee/tea plantation and their strategies for cultivation or harvesting. Additionally, they have bunch of new friends in their new place of travel. They also become expert in cooking cuisines specific to area. People learn new languages when they need to travel in local transport in the area. Finally, Travel makes them retrieve from their stress, relax and rejuvenate them self. Travel makes person reliable, friendly and more confident. They greet and meet humans that they never met with so patience and care. They understand the psychology of local people and feel on them self about how much blessed they are.
Tourism is important to share each state/country culture, food, specialties. It also makes people learn how travelers like national geographic explore forests and difficulties faced by exploring wild animals.
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- Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs believing that this will maketheir staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.Consider the arguments from both aspects of 78
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...odays digital world than previous years in 1960s. Advantages of travelling are to learn ...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bunched'.
Suggestion: bunched
... or harvesting. Additionally, they have bunch of new friends in their new place of tr...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'makes'' or 'make's'?
Suggestion: makes'; make's
... relax and rejuvenate them self. Travel makes person reliable, friendly and more conf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21404682274 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56223964122 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7289718074 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0526315789 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313414570413 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113166482974 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770741651989 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189134834078 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074959654014 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.