Team sport help students to learn more than usual games.
What lessons would they learn by playing team sports.
How these lessons would be beneficial for students
Playing sports in team is more worthwhile as compared to individual games. There are multifarious benefits of group sports, which will be beneficial to the pupils for their future. I will discuss the lessons which students can learn by these games and how these are fruitful, in the upcoming paragraphs.
commencing with, there are plethora of things which students can learn from team sports. First and foremost, social skills can be enhanced by playing in groups, in these games, students have to coöperate with other members, hence it develop team spirit among them. Moreover, they gain momentum from group sports because they learn many tips and techniques from their counterparts. For instance, in a team, a new member learn various things about team strategies, therefore he can grasp huge knowledge during his game.
These skills are imperative in one's life. Firstly , sense of cooperation helps an individual to be adjustable in every work field because of his potential to deal with others. Furthermore, experience that they learned in group sports is lifelong beneficial for them to handle various situations and to get success in their field, because in team they have to do hard work to defeat their rivals and show their will power. For illustration, a student who has experience of playing in team sport in their childhood, it will be a lifelong lesson for him to work in cooperation and to deal with every situation
To conclude, I pen down saying that team sports are more fruitful for students in all the ways to get success in life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01923076923 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63832541564 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7653191822 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417228736371 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159082599473 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781718411189 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266415531457 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671676097962 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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