Letter to the airline manager stating problem you had with the staff
Write flight details
Explain the problems
What you want manager to do
Dear Sir
II am writing this letter to express my utter annoyance with staff of fly Jet Airways. I I was travelling to Manali from Amritsar flight number MH1685 and my seat number 12C. The flight time was 10:30 AM from the airport. The facilities provided in aeroplane Was fine but I did not like the behaviour of some staff members.
After 20 minutes of flight I called us to your word to get food and I told him to bring vegetarian food only. Halfway through my meal, I bit into what turned out to be a chicken bone the presence of bone was totally jarring as i am vegetarian. I showed this to one of the staff members but he just ignored my complaint and showed reckless behaviour, which was totally ridiculous act of them. I am completely disappointed with the service of your employees.
I believe that you would refund my half ticket price and take strict action against team members for their unprofessional behaviour. I can be reached by phone at (444). Hope you will take action very soon to avoid any further inconvenience.
Yours faithfully
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir II am writing this letter to express my utter...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: I
...nnoyance with staff of fly Jet Airways. I I was travelling to Manali from Amritsar ...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...noyance with staff of fly Jet Airways. I I was travelling to Manali from Amritsar...
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Line 9, column 228, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...presence of bone was totally jarring as i am vegetarian. I showed this to one of ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th the service of your employees. I believe that you would refund my half t...
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Line 13, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ers for their unprofessional behaviour. I can be reached by phone at 444. Hope yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67894736842 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62702764322 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673684210526 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6659482692 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778375944083 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027273200198 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256872084252 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530317172523 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203443749481 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.