The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods To what extent do you agree or disagree

It's true that most people tend to copy one another, we can see it more often when it comes to the last trend in clothes and other consumers goods. This topic arises discussions about the powerful influence of social media on the new generations and the feeling of belonging. In the following essay, I will explain why I completely agree with this statement.

Nowadays, social media it's at the top of the market; the majority of us make use of social media or follow somebody that admire. To illustrate, I am super passionate about sports; most sportswomen that I follow on Instagram are hired by the big companies to post photos using the last activewear or propaganda with logos. Furthermore, adolescents do not have the income to purchase these clothes as parents would be the ones who pay for them.

On the other hand, the women's world become super competitive, people would like something that you are using and ask where did you buy it to pretend to be like you. For example, if you go to the gym every day, you will notice that people stared at you, sometimes they will not do it on purpose as well as your clothes, body and this is when the celous starts and the competition for being like you or better.

Having considered all the arguments above, I would conclude that this tendency is not appropriate but it's everywhere and we are responsible for finalizing or making it grow in our daily decisions.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion:
... making it grow in our daily decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66932270916 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57783394607 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9734222737 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.222222222 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205868231319 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741107339175 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660957470616 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104203222516 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045455241925 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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