There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Please provide solution
Music is the most beautiful and precious gift to mankind. Music has so many diverse forms to express a different type of emotions like love, sorrow, happiness, and even anger. It is considered the most powerful tool as a stress buster. A dumb person can speak a lot of things just by playing music. It exists since the very existence of humans and will be an eternal part of humanity.
Bounding music within a border of any nation is impossible. The world has various types of music depending upon region to region but it has spread irrespective of any perimeter or culture. There is a variety of traditional music worldwide like classical music is traditional to India whereas pop music comes from the west.
Traditional music is often played at religious places as it uplifts the spirits and connects to Gods. The melodies generated by traditional music help is meditation thus connecting with eternal peace. International music is more about entertainment contrary to traditional music. Jazz and Rock are the two most popular forms of international music followed by a new generation. But fashionableness and commercialization of music by such international music types is cutting off youth from their roots and culture. It is very important to inherit values and traditions in our coming generation or we might lose our cultural identities. Traditional music is also called Folk music which is considered as the music of old times.
Considering the preservation of traditional music, some artists have introduced the concept of fusion. They are fusing multiple genres with several folk genres and trying to keep our traditional music alive by such experiments. But these efforts are not much appreciated as traditional music tends to lose originality. The authenticity of traditional music cannot be replaced with international music. Traditional music defines historical and geographical aspects associated with culture and should be preserved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29260450161 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09231156162 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.599339422 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494961128362 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178570755654 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107120081898 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324805880512 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866163153043 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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