Music is vital for a happy existence,as it is a mode of expression whether jovial,sad,anger,mourning or celebratory. it relieves stress ,as it provides a break from a monotonous life and helps in increasing cognitive abilities of a young mind Every domain of music whether traditional or international has its own virtue ,however traditional music surpass international music in having a bigger role. Traditional music connects society to its roots and carries its heritage , and serves as a foundation of any form of international music as any kind of international music stems from some form of local music only . In this essay role of music and vitality of traditional music will be discussed
Music is not a futile leisure activity ,it has been evidently proven that it plays an important role in development of cognitive centers in a budding mind. In a recent study conducted by British association of neurology ,It has been found out that children exposed to any form of music have developed more intellectual capabilities in comparison to control group . Furthermore music relieves stress and provides a refreshing break from activities of life .Other than that music is an expression of emotions ,it provides an outlet of inner feelings.
Although international music has an undeniable significance as it brings people of different cultures together and let them share their own music ,But local or traditional music has more important role .First of all it is bedrock of any international music .as any form of traditional music has originated from a single local music or is a cummulation of many
Traditional music keeps alive the connection of society to its heritage . It reminds present generation and educates future generation about past .There is plethora of folklore documented musically depicting life style, wars ,social norms and values of that culture .It is an excellent mode of conserving the fading history .
To sum up with ,Music has undeniable role in development and growth of human existence and is sure a outlet of expression .Albeit international music has its own virtue ,but a traditional music has much bigger role as it is a documented evidence of our heritage and is foundation of any international music
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17355371901 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25691336096 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479338842975 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8887434554 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.666666667 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.3333333333 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416502755207 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21498490729 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107368189526 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276994537773 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108696887354 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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