in the modern span, technology spread its leg in every nook and corner. in all cellphone is pivotal invention. i firmly disagree with the statement that cellular phone create any mishap in community, hospital and in technology. this essay enlighten the benefits overweight their drawbacks in trail paragraph.
to embark, although there are myriad benefits of the usage of mobile, yet drawback cannot be avoided. first and prominent drawback of it is over usage, through that one can loss their eye-sight as well as sometimes people could become victim of hazardous disease like cancer. secondly, it distract mainly students mind as they addicted for games and waste their study time. lastly, some people have habit to receive a call during driving, and occur serious accident.
in other side, however some issues, it could be resolved by cure. there are countless perquisite of usage of wireless telephone. first and foremost it minimize the distance, people connected with others through some mobile apps; Facebook, Instagram. add on to this people can call and listen their voice, also through video call they can see them. secondly, it is very easy to find out solution related to study within one click, student get help through mobile to complete their homework as well as assignments.
continuing the debate, there are ample of facilities available on phone. housewives also earn money through online job. apart from that people use mobile for office work instead of computers. owners prefer to do meetings on conference call and save their time as well as money.their many online companies available; zomato, swiggi, uber are epitomi. consequently some companies start to providing online service such as ticket booking, information, feed back forms and many more. through that one's life become flexible. lastly, nowadays, doctors are also available online so that patient could follow their instruction,as well as people can order medicine online anytime.
in conclusion, we can say that mobile is paramount for human's life. it's benefits overweight to demerits. people have to use it as per their requirements.
- There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones.What forms do they take?Do you agree the problems of mobile phones outweigh the benefits? 84
- Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31656804734 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59414823321 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612426035503 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1143455984 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1304347826 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6956521739 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103250560431 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290078502486 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289602479206 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614710981793 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235159735621 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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