These days it seems that an increasing number of the people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss effect of migration on cities and suggest some solution to reverse the trend.
In recent decades, the migration of the people from the countryside to cities has increased rapidly which has drastically impacted the urban areas. I will discuss the effects of this shift on the cities and also suggest solutions for reversing this.
To begin with, the huge number of migrants from rural areas tends to overpopulate the cities which in turn leads to various problems. Firstly, the concentration of the job vacancies remains the same however, the job seeker's number drastically increases which results in unemployment in the cities. This unemployment, later on, becomes the reason for the rise in the crime rate in the urban areas. Additionally, this increased population sometimes leads to the creation of slums in the urban areas which in turn deteriorate the quality of various services such as water and hospitals. For instance, a survey done by “The Times” in Chandigarh reveals that only 7 percent of the population is the local population, and rest are from different states that came there in search of a job and a better lifestyle.
However, we need to know the reason behind this migration before solving this problem and the biggest reason is unemployment, no job opportunities, and low rate services. The government can enhance the education pattern of the rural areas and also generate new job opportunities for the local people which can obviously deter the rate of migration. Additionally, the services such as government hospitals and proper drinking water should be provided to the people and the people involved in the horticulture, aquaculture, or other kinds of agriculture should be incentives properly which help in lowering the migration.
To conclude, the impact of the movement of people from rural areas to cities has lowered the quality of various services and tends to increase the rate of unemployment. Although, steps like generating new job vacancies and increasing the quality of the services in the rural areas which definitely help in dampening this increasing immigration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23619631902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94238942671 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481595092025 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8168909901 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.25 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214872756131 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908358627338 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771590957644 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163088930206 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893981164034 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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