Going abroad has become prevalent in this fast-paced world. We are not surprised to find out that people moving to other countries either for a better job opportunity or academic purposes, which directly affects the locals of those regions. Although there are many benefits to these countries because of immigrants such as economic growth and opportunity to learn different culture, it also hampers the ecosystem and prices of basic needs.
In the recent decade, foreign countries always attract many immigrants in the face of skilled workers and students, through which they get many benefits. Firstly, when a group travels to another country with different culture, language or lifestyle, locals usually get opportunity to learn the new culture from them. Also, it will count as a positive experience in meeting new people. The second advantage of moving to another country is steep growth in the economy of that country. As skilled workers in a foreign country always try hard to find the best way to earn their living and managed to get good wages which helps the country's economy to rise in a fast-pace. For instance, an increase in the number of people living and working in a foreign country will add more taxes paid to the government, which will add on to the development of that country.
Although there are many benefits of the ascertain but destruction in ecosystem and price of basic needs has risen alarmingly. With a large number of population, the demand for food, shelter and other basic needs has increased, as a consequence, products got costly. To exemplify, with the increase in the number of people in a region like Delhi, the cost of properties have risen at almost double-digit rate over a decade. Another disadvantage of over-immigrants is the destructive ecosystem. The rising number of people in the same region impact the ecosystem begets habitat degradation and environmental disaster.
To conclude, though there are many advantages of living and working in a foreign country such as early development of a country and learning multiple cultures, there is no doubt that large number will cause habitat degradation and prices of daily needs will get almost double. In my opinion, the regime should set a limit on immigrants and also manage the number of people living in a particular area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Although there are many benefits of the ascertain but destruction in ecosystem and price ...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... basic needs has risen alarmingly. With a large number of population, the demand for food, shelte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07310704961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75232234847 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493472584856 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7093170767 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4375 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233059146061 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717509625987 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042884352509 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143822976668 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056464847714 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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