In the recent decade, with the advancement of technology health has become a major issue amongst people especially youngsters. It is believed that mostly in developed regions of the world many children have been seen overweighted as compared to less developed countries. The main reasons cause obesity and overweight are less physical activities and unhealthy food, which directly affects metabolism and chronic illness such as diabetes and blood pressure.
There are certain reasons why children becoming overweight. Firstly, plenty of evidence suggested that earlier children used to play more outdoor games as compared to recent world. With the advancement of technology, the interest of children in outdoor activity has been diverted to visual games which can be played easily on computer or mobile devices. In big countries where the technology strike first, children are not getting enough opportunity for any physical activity. For instance, before technology, educational institutes had always played a vital role in developing interest of sports in students but now they have more focus on education which can easily effect metabolism of children and results lethargy and lack of energy.
Another reason of increasing overweighted children is junk food. Higher intake of unhealthy food effects the children's body, which begets serious health-related issues such as diabetes. For instance, a recent evidence suggested that consumption of junk food has risen alarmingly these days which causes obesity and other diseases. The solution to deal with this issue is the awareness in people about a healthy life. This can be done by advertisement and media portrayals.
To conclude, although the obesity has become a serious problem all over the world especially in developed countries, but can be handled if government and parents of these youngsters take appropriate actions and diverting children towards physical activities in school will proof as the key.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55149501661 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82325964522 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6693642437 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21075905604 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774786669999 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402534072562 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124531220364 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161337931815 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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