Prevalence of adopting a vegetarian diet in major cities is even greater nowadays. For some people such as animal activists, eating meat is tantamount to murder of animals. While some individuals ascertain that meat is full of necessary nutrients which require for a positive development of the human body. However, my conviction tends me to go with meat for diet.
From the past decade, a plethora of people is getting mesmerized to attractive body. What pops up human health is the nutrition value of the food consumed. However, it has been seen that there are only a few vegetables are multi-nutrients rich, so in many cases being rich in vitamin, protein, minerals etc become very difficult for vegans in terms of varieties. Whereas meat is itself rich in multi-nutrients, that is the reason many prefer to choose meat over vegetables. In brief, nowadays people are having time-crunch in order to take care of each and every nutrient intake so meat fulfils all the requirement as well it is helpful to gain body strength.
Another reason behind this is the cost which increased when buying varieties. Owing to the exponential rise in human population, the amount of cultivable land has decreased alarmingly. Hence people are left with the only choice of having a mixed diet. For instance, there are certain terrains like dessert where people are carnivorous as the agriculture field is rare and importing of food would be expensive.
To recapitulate, by considering health benefits, it can be predicted that more people will start having non-vegetarian diet as its benefits in terms of strength and nutrients cannot be belittled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ltivable land has decreased alarmingly. Hence people are left with the only choice of...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in brief, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10780669145 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91383423134 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0855666886 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171187420089 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576108965127 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531444395949 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986363009561 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590432211861 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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