These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
In today’s world, whilst more mothers engage in formal paid work, an increasing number of fathers stay at home and take responsibility for child-caring. This trend is attributed to a multitude of factors, and it has both merits and demerits in equal measures.
There are numerous reasons why more men become caregivers and women become breadwinners, one of which is the effect of women’s movements that have been taken place for years. This means that the empowerment and gender equity have enabled females to enter the labor force, providing them opportunities for personal and professional growth. What is more, some occupations require high level of cleverness and patience, which can be found in female workers rather than their male counterparts. For this reason, in certain work positions, women are more preferred. Another justification is that many fathers desire to stay at home so that they can spend more time with their offspring, hoping that they can experience the life of a homemaker, not the role of a financial provider as usual.
The above-mentioned demographic shift, however, has both beneficial and detrimental impacts. On the positive side, working mothers can act as a role model for their children. It is true that the participation in workforce might allow women to connect with different people from diverse backgrounds, helping them broaden social relationships and accumulate hands-on experience. This would therefore boost their self-esteem and enhance maternal upbringing. It should also be noted that when staying at home, doing household chores and looking after their children, fathers can not only strengthen the bonding with their kids but can also better understand and sympathize with their wife. On the flip side, if the fathers are traditional and conservative, he may self-label as burden for his wife, and show resentment to her. Also, some are not good at housework or child-rearing, so they could end up messing up their homes.
In sum, there are various contributors to the situation in which fathers stay at home and mothers go to work. This phenomenon however would bring about not only upsides but also downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25360230548 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91846757979 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616714697406 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7927058088 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356436446949 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10696276102 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851741616492 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212946398516 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00511673599011 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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