Throughout history, male leaders have led us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Well when we go those the historical background, it is very clear that women and men tried their best whenever got chance to govern and lead. Basically, there are more examples of the men who led the various activities, schemes programs and mostly end up in wars and disputes. It is reckoned by some individuals that if this has been led by women it would be more clam and tranquil but I completely disagree with the fact.
Actually, fact is not this that I am against feminism but the reason is that women are soft hearted and thinks every aspect emotionally without analyzing the dark side of the situation. Most of the time it is seen that the women bosses are less strict as compared to the male bosses as they get easily persuaded by the excuses given the staff and trust them easily. Women doesn’t possess commanding nature hence, the guideline , rule and regulations made by them need more power to get implemented moreover, we live in patriarchal society here women always need a man at their backend for every act.
However, when we look back into history the historical events are the proofs that the governance led by women also end up in war, conflict and violent activities for instance Rani Lakshmi Bai led the war from Jhansi for independent in 1847, later on first lady prime minister of India Indira Gandhi adopted different violent means against Sikhs religious temple (Golden Temple).
On the other hand, men are more of commanding behavior therefore, they have different attitude toward the work hence, are less prone to get satisfied with praise by any staff member or faculty. They are more not violent but definitely dedicated to the work, they taken as responsibility. They think practically with an optimistic thinking. The struggle of independence is the example of their dedication towards the nation, no doubt it was lead violently and many conflict occurred but it resulted in very positive output.
To conclude, we can say that men has practical thinking and stable thoughts unlike women hence, they can govern better than women as earlier example nowhere showcase the activities led by women ended peacefully.
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel Task Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will co 73
- You have just finished your master s degree and need to leave your current part time job to search for full time employment Write a letter to your current employer In your letter explain why you will not be able to pursue a full time job in his her compan 78
- You are going to visit the UK for an English and Homestay program Write a letter to the host family introduce yourself ask the family some question to get essential information about the UK tell the family scheduled date of arrival and time 73
- Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to a music concert Please say Where and when does the concert start What type of music will be played there Why do you think your friend will enjoy it 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s commanding nature hence, the guideline , rule and regulations made by them need ...
^^
Line 7, column 460, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conflict seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conflicts'.
Suggestion: many conflicts
...ion, no doubt it was lead violently and many conflict occurred but it resulted in very positi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stable thoughts unlike women hence, they can govern better than women as earlier ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93388429752 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56505002772 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600550964187 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2655953334 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125894729442 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479425122435 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393686877724 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690985067206 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329619045335 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.