Today children are spending much more time watching TV compared to the past. Why do you think this happens? Is this a positive or a negative change?
Undoubtedly, television has become a part and parcel of our daily routine. Due to technological advancement, these devices attract the most attention of children who end up spending most of their day glued to these screens. I personally believe that this is a negative trend and peer pressure and innovation in the gaming and filming industry are the real culprits.
To begin with, these days youngsters waste most of their precious time by sitting in front of these boxes. The real reason behind this is great influence or rather pressure from friends. Moreover, when adolescents see their peers watching certain tv shows or movies and finding it amusing, they themselves want to imitate them, despite not liking it, in order to be abreast with the latest trend and be a part of the group. As a result, they end up wasting their precious time which they could have utilized for other activities. Furthermore, the latest developments in high-quality video games and 3-D animation movies attract these young minds to another extent. Consequently, they are prone to tv screens all the time to experience these gaming adventures, not realizing the detrimental effects.
In addition to this addiction, there are numerous negative effects on these young citizens. First of all, watching TV beyond a stipulated amount of time has adverse effects on health and fitness. The rays coming from the screens lead to the extreme dryness of the eye causing the itchy feeling and eventually spectacles at an early age. Secondly, children tend to forget to look after their well-being. For instance, sitting engrossed in games or videos, kids forget to have a check on the quantity of junk food consumed. Therefore, they end up gaining weight and suffer from obesity. According to a recent survey, obesity is commonly seen around 35% among children below the age of 10. Hence, if appropriate parental guidance and monitoring are not taken then the situation can become worse.
To conclude, even though watching television programs may seem amusing and exciting for the younger generation, in the long term it can lead to perilous effects on their health. It is of utmost importance that parents take control and involve children in various outdoor activities or mind games for the development of their cognitive and social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11578947368 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69956393319 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597368421053 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3258694462 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.315789474 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125262320134 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377681377518 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370939478807 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750267546913 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245503328423 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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