Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is an opinion that the popularity of some best-sellers lies in the magic of advertising and does not reflect the true needs of the population, which is buying all this stuff. I completely agree with this idea as a large number of people’s desires are growing from ubiquitous adverts.
First, nowadays advertisements are an ever-present phenomenon and pop-up from every-single corner such as TV, radio and the Internet. There is no person on the planet who was able to hide from the influence of mass media. Thus, all these commercials impact our behaviour and choice. In fact, human-beings are significantly social creatures and they tend to subconsciously choose goods and services that are hype. For instance, once I had bought ridiculously high-heels boots, even though I was not able to wear them. The only reason for the mentioned purchase was that they were all the rage at the moment.
Second, the true need of everyone is compassion, love, sense of purpose, health, etc. Frankly speaking, even cutting-edge technologies such as the latest model of iPhone are not able to make a person happy without loving family, faithful friends and strong health. All these widely-advertised consumer goods just give a glimpse of satisfaction, which also quickly fades away. To illustrate, some people, despite not having any decent shelter and necessities for comfortable life, take credits for brand-new mobiles or other modern gadgets.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the point of view that the real demand of the society differs from the consumption, the rate of which is explained by the success of an advertisement company.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, frankly, if, second, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2030075188 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98905989481 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7777930051 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166392002703 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492980053197 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526720066495 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101170115205 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359119803054 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.