Today, many people want to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development?
Marriages are an everlasting commitment between partners Now-a-day, more people are getting married in their thirties then they were young. In my opinion, this change ha both positive and negative impact like to sides of a same coin. On positive front, it helps them in stabilising their carrier and prepare them for next phase, but on negative side, their bodies get deteriorated.
To begin with, there are benefits attached to it when individuals get married in thirties. First and most importantly, they can take their carrier to its peak. Being single gives them an opportunity to be fully focused toward their goal. They can take risk of switching jobs for further growth and increased remuneration, which they cannot if they have family responsibility.
Last but not the least, by the thirties they become mentally developed and financially stable. People in their thirties are mature enough to take responsibility of their family. Needless to mention, they are financially capable of providing but education and other amenities to their children. A recent survey suggested that people who get married after 20’s have secure job and they have strong bond with their family.
On the flip side, there is no denying in the fact that their decision of marring late certainly have some cons like their body is not capable enough. These persons are certainly resourceful, however their body is not active because of which they are not able to involve in physical activity with their kids. Some women have difficulty in conceiving in late thirties. An article in TOI (Times of India) says more and more women in cities are utilising IVF and other medical breakthrough to extend their family.
To my mind, there are positives and negatives attached to the late marriages. For conclude, people are certainly at that height of thus carries and they are mature enough to take responsibility of their new family, but by thirties their body is not fit to enjoy their family to the fullest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'side'.
Suggestion: side
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09726443769 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64506506785 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2893621638 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345350820582 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11383193657 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538995575228 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205046143767 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674462874057 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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