It has become quiet a common trend that increasingly more people are showing interest in visiting the places with harsh climatic conditions on the earth. Moreover. I believe that it gives a great experience to the travellers. Further, if they spend some time understanding the conditions over there, will reduce the negative effects on them.
Traveling to such harsh places has a many benifits. Firstly, in such places the amount of resources available to survive are pretty scarse. For instance,the water availability in Sahara.This educates the tourists about the need to safegaurd and use our resources and use them very conservatively. Often, they tend to carry forward their experiences and learnings into their daily life. As a result it helps in using the resources wisely. Secondly, in such places it is very hard to use any electronic gadgets, as the power and connectivity is at its bare minimal leve;. This allows the individuals to completely blend and enjoy the surroundings. Furthermore, due to less usage of electronic devices, it allows people to socialize with people around them and relieves stress further.
Although, it might looks attractive to travel to such places as Antarctica or Sahara, such places also being their own challenges to the tourists. Firstly, the climatic conditions at such places are very rough and volatile. Its also known that weather at those places changes so quickly, often in order of few minutes. Inorder to adjust to such conditions it requires a good amount of stamina and a proper health. Further, people with certain health conditions are not adviced to travel to such places. Secondly, the nearest civilization is in a radius of few hundred kilometers . In such a situation, on the event of a strom or a natural disaster, people get struck for days without any access to food or water. Often, this is the reason for most deaths in travelers.
To conclude. Travelling to such places can be dangerous at times. In my view, i believe that if people make a proper assesment about the place they wish to travel and their capabilities before they start, this would give them a good learning and memorable experience.
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- Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
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- With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...es and learnings into their daily life. As a result it helps in using the resource...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...good learning and memorable experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05849582173 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81956896277 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551532033426 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7644899263 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4761904762 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271284667299 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733911939463 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695315308631 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151761472786 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501491091019 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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