Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are he benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Travelling has changed in the last few decades. Nowadays more and more people prefer extraordinary travel destinations like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of visiting such places with difficult conditions.
Globalization and technologies made travelling mainstream and available for the majority of the population. Therefore, people started looking for alternative non-touristic destinations. The benefits of travelling to such places are tremendous. Firstly, by visiting unconventional destinations tourists can get to know other cultures and gain a different perspective. For instance, by visiting the Antarctic one can experience firsthand the effect of climate change. A tourist can also contribute to local economies due to the fact that, in general, such locations do not have developed economies and are not commonly visited by others. For example, by visiting a remote village in Myanmar, one can help out local community financially by buying a handmade craftwork or staying at their accommodation.
On the other hand, it is not very safe to visit such remote locations. As one’s immune system is not accustomed to the bacteria particular to that area, it is very easy for one to get sick. Usually hospitals or places where proper aid can be provided are not available there. Moreover, such places are not for people looking for convenience and comfort because it is unlikely you will be staying in a comfortable hotel with all the amenities and facilities.
Overall, one can gain an extraordinary and unforgettable experience by travelling to uncommon destinations, however, one should be more cautious and ready for discomfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25495558152 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2867479411 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322408018407 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106052261883 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585595534081 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184999019449 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713259522892 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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