Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert to the Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
In this contemporary era, people are inclining towards adventurous trips and excursions. Particularly youths are more excited about tours which give them a unique and memorable experience. Tourist can see the grace of nature at those places. However, on the downside, so many tourists would get ill even after successful completion of the journey.
To begin with, places like the Sahara desert and Antarctica are believed to be the hottest and coolest place on the earth. Survival over there is so tough that it requires one’s full physical and mental strengths. However, at the end of journey, it ensures long-lasting and mesmerising experience which no other places on earth can serve. For example, one organisation at Rio runs the trip to the Antarctica where most affluent teenagers register just to gain extraordinary experience of the rigid wether. They also believe that by being at the place they can measure their physical and mental capability against extreme weather.
However, these strange journeys infect teenagers and aged people, mostly after completion of the trip and make them ill. one’s mind can take a load of the strange atmosphere at those places, but body often rejects the drastic change in surroundings. For example, one of the tourist companies in my city had planned a trip of Amazon forest, they only sent an invitation to mentally and physically strong people such as young athletes and sportspersons. They all successfully completed said excursion. But, they complained about falling ill just after the journey the strange adventurous trip. They added that their mind possible fought well with the forest environment, but their body could not.
To deduce, I can say by contemplating advantages and disadvantages that there is no doubt that one will get unforgivable experience but most people’s body will answer the fact in adverse way when journey will get over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One&apos
...mpletion of the trip and make them ill. one's mind can take a load of the strange a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, for example, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27124183007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8551788423 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3213784405 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122006507915 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384110515336 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044095576854 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687588479865 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369021122659 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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