In today’s world, traveling has become more popular and people’s desire than in previous years. In this essay, I will investigate the main reason why people are traveling more and I will present what the advantageous point of view could be.
Due to the fact that sightseeing and traveling appeal to everyone regardless of the decade. the only restriction was transportation availability when it is compared to the present, It was limited so that travelers could not be traveled as they wish. Nowadays, different transportation techniques developed such as, high-speed trains, ferries, air plans which enable people to travel conveniently. For example, I had traveled Europe by taking flights, trains and some modern buses as well which enable me to reach the other country in few hours, whereas it would be so hard for me to travel there in previous decades because of the inconvenience of transportation styles. Within a variety of vehicle development, people are more likely to travel to far places even if it is on a different continent, Indeed, It was impossible in past years.
Spreading out of traveling has many advantages in many aspects of view. Firstly, Finding new opportunities become easier, as people see different aspects. Different perspectives can be gain from the place that has been travel. For example, one of my brothers had been in China for traveling. Once he returned from China he has established his business with the idea that he earned from there. Secondly, People get away from it all and can get rid of the stress gained in the work environment.
In conclusion, because of the increase in the availability of traveling with the new traveling methods people tend to learn about the things that they have never experienced. Therefore, Travelling abroad not only give travelers pleasure of sightseeing but also contribute their everyday life, my brother is the greatest example.
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17628205128 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99765516241 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5336239095 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424554989033 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138878804995 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748026247145 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263777421369 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791503889756 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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