Today, most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, large population considers thirties a suitable age for getting married and raising a family. In this essay, I will highlight the reasons of this trend and why I in my view, it is the positive development considering current socio-economic conditions.
Let's first discuss the reasons of this trend. today, economic conditions has completely changed and they are not same as they were used to be ten to twenty years back. In today's world, people tends to enjoy high standard of living. In other words, they want to lead a comfortable and luxurious life which requires a decent amount of income. As a result, many products and services has become quite expensive and raising a children and affording his or her education is one of them.
In their early twenties many people started their jobs after passing from universities and tends to focus more on their career rather than on having a family. Also, their financial conditions are rather more fragile since most of them have loan to repay which, in many cases, could take five to six years.
having said that, by time people enters into their thirties, they become more financial stable and more experience in their work. In other words, after working eleven to twelve years in their field, they enjoy much needed stability and handsome salary. considering a current scenarios, this would be the best time to raise a family and settling down as they would now able to invest enough time towards family responsibilities which might be difficult in their twenties. Furthermore, with the age people tends to get more maturity, which is must needed to start a family and having life partner.
To conclude, taking current economic conditions into account, thirties seems to be perfect age for settling down as people are more mature and financially strong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, as a result, in many cases, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0198019802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59071072667 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0380609798 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253578878001 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080382596351 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040355764728 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127903325592 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408247704253 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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