Today, people can work and live anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
There is whole lot of things that have changed of how we perform our office work and communicate with our colleagues and clients thanks to the enhancement in technology not only this but also the way we travel to work and other important things has improved siginificantly, in my opinion, there are more pros than cons.
Firstly, today the technology around us has made us work smarter which not only gives us an opportunity to perform better but also avoids uneccesary distractions such as long phone calls and meetings are simply eradicated from our calendar instead we deal with E-mails and some new team chatting tools which helps us to get around things lot quicker. For instance, if I want to send a design plan to my client i can share the info with a (an) E-mail at my comfort and discussions can instanly happen through E-mail platform.
Secondly, Transportation is one scuh thing which has improved a lot in the last decade. Many cites around the world has (have) really doubled down on creating infrastructures such as airports and inter-city travel which saves a lot of time. To illustrate, if I have to travel for work to other cities, I can catch a flight at my convience and be there on time for the assginment.
On the other side, there is one disadvantage sometimes to solve issues in a project or have a good team bonding we might need to have a certain amount of facetime with our team so we can understand each other better and perfom the task much efficently. For example, if your company is overseas you might feel little uncomfortable until you get used to the people who you work with and bond with them, then things get much easier in fact it will help you perfom at ease.
To conclude, I would say ease of working from home and transportation has improved many lives and cities around us by creating many jobs and economy, although it has slight disadvantages it is more convienent way of doing things to save time and effort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
There is whole lot of things that have changed of how we p...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding technology'?
Suggestion: the surrounding technology
... more pros than cons. Firstly, today the technology around us has made us work smarter which not only...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...ting tools which helps us to get around things lot quicker. For instance, if I want to...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...want to send a design plan to my client i can share the info with a an E-mail at ...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to my client i can share the info with a an E-mail at my comfort and discussions...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
... to my client i can share the info with a an E-mail at my comfort and discussions ca...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...decade. Many cites around the world has have really doubled down on creating infrast...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'disadvantage'.
Suggestion: sometimes disadvantage
...ent. On the other side, there is one disadvantage sometimes to solve issues in a project or have a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64655172414 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66966704721 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8731328126 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.666666667 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156462977621 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645598091167 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413449315933 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898604928053 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034806896439 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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