In today's era, TV has become very important part of life as a medium to spread intelligence and social awareness. Do you think it could have other side as well?
It is widely held belief that television is an important medium for spreading intelligence and raising awareness. But, there is also a counter argument among some sections of people. For them TV can cause harm to the society by depriving their ability to think independently. However, I think that this has to be a well debated topic. One has to consider several factors before coming to a conclusion.
It is generally believed that, TV plays a vital role in passing information around the globe. This is mainly because of the fact that, TV offers both visual as well as sonal effects, while sharing information. Although phone was first invented, it is only with adoption of TV that more people could perceive information better, due to visual treat it brings.
On the other hand, there are certain groups of people who vehemently disagree with above notion. They contend that the harm caused by TV is ir-recoverable. One of the main reasons for this view is, many well-known Psychologists all over the world are conducting multiple campaigns to keep children away from TV in their childhood. It is proved that watching TV can inhibit their mental growth and creativity.
Overall, it is pretty clear that both the ideologies have strong supporting evidences. Both of them cannot be refuted. Nonetheless, I think every object needs to be evaluated for its real purpose. It has to be used consciously and thoughtfully. This method would never cause any harm to anyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...mation around the globe. This is mainly because of the fact that, TV offers both visual as well as sonal...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...of the fact that, TV offers both visual as well as sonal effects, while sharing informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, nonetheless, so, well, while, as to, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02845528455 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80570566322 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7281159578 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7647058824 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157792006648 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422318614055 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440510577064 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870237894134 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461107445493 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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