Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked
It is now an established statistical fact that more countries are recording rising revenues from the tourism industry.
In the first instance, in appears as if more people are getting interested in international travels particularly for holidays and leisure. The chain effect of this on the economy is that there is more revenue coming in from the aviation sector. Also, as more people com into the countries for short visit as tourists, the hotels and hospitality sector of the economy also their hands busy with top north service delivery in order to satisfy their clients. Needless to say is the fact that the food and beverage sector also have their share of the revenue as tourists do not only give local food a try, they also buy to take back to their bases. Apart from this the art and creative industry's contributes significantly to the revenue generating pool due to the patronage the artifacts markets receives.
The major demerits of the tourism industry are security in nature. It was recorded that most of those responsible for bomb blasts in market places were terrorists who came in as tourists. Apart from this criminal elements smuggle illicit drugs into the country after securing their tourist visas.
I believe that if countries can tidy up the security and evolve creative means of ensuring that those they grant visas to are genuine tourists, we might just be entering another round of economic boom from tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98755186722 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54608865692 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618257261411 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3638868086 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106295316484 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453641067363 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382191880743 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794541928519 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343584106236 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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