Tourism is causing environmental problems all over the world.
What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions.
Tourism is the primary reason behind the increase in global warming and other countryside issues.
The amount of tourism has been increased due to the ease of travel, the advertisements premiered by local and global merchants. But the nature's values in the human eye has dropped. For everyone's benefit, one should follow the guild line provided by government as well the international organizations
We faced many nature disasters, not one global warming, but pandemic, California and Australia fire are some of them and at some point, tourism was behind this.
Now a days, people behave like small kids, they misuse the facility provided by tour authorities, Government and primarily by our mother earth.
People gets very excited to enjoy weekend outing, small work off or even long trips, no one want to use public transportation, everyone want to drive or fly without knowing the increases air pollution. WHO indicated that today 75% individual are breathing polluted air.
With present work environment and busy schedule, everyone wants to relax but at what cost? The beaches, all famous tourist spots are overcrowded. No one follow the rules.
Mostly people through the garbage on road or in the water. Our sea is getting polluted and sea life is in danger zone, many animals are getting extinct. all-natural resources are getting destroyed as well.
This is a very big loss, which is very difficult to recover, however if people start to take care of small things, and play their roles to words the glob, take care of heritage sites, nature's health will rise.
Our world just suffers from pandemic; with the global lockdown, all travel were banned, and the result was quite good. The nature become more beautiful.
To Sum up what stated above. Many people travel without understanding their responsibilities and duties. By following underline rules published by local authorities, the fire of environmental issue will decrease, and mother earth will live longer.
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: “WHO” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All-natural
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.221875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70286125881 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.1112278051 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9473684211 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109200245534 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298465577696 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034853901248 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424565757277 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351107546483 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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