Nowadays, tourism is a successful industry that it is in expansion everyday around the world. It is well known the large profits that can generate in different countries, and how local economies are improving through it. In my point of view, this business have a positive potential that are bringing important benefits to society and people.
First, several countries are running policies to improve and expand tourism in their regions. Governments are aware how this industry have the key to produce immense earnings to their economies and they are making important investments to develop this area. For instance, Asiatic governments in the last ten years are improved their GNP in a 25% through the continued investment on tourism and positioning this industry in third place of importance. In short, the increase of the budget on tourism can generate jobs and improvements to local economies.
Secondly, tourism can produce several opportunities to individuals. The expansion of hotels, tours and gastronomy create numerous workplaces and that means a decrease of unemployment rates. Furthermore, infrastructure is other area that has many benefits through tourism, like basic services, new roads, transport and communications. For example, in Jujuy, a province from Argentina, several small villages had improve their urban situation through tourism, drawing foreign and national investment that have created more opportunities to the inhabitants. Thus, tourism can have a positive impact on individuals, enhancing many possibilities both economical and technological.
In conclusion, tourism is a business with a huge potential to society and people, that can change countries economies, even the options of little towns, bringing new possibilities for their populations and inserting they in the economical circuit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68248175182 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10710859501 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.77925309 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172808684354 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701388675087 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425832034576 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113858451334 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162805926258 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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