tourists and not local people are visiting museums and historical sites. why is it so and what are the ways to attract local people?
Museums and monuments showcase the history ,culture and tradition of any country. Most of such places , nowadays , attract tourists while the footfall of local inhabitants is meager. There are numerous reasons for such a trend and simple measures taken by the government can increase the attendance of local people .
To begin with , local people shun museums and historical sites because the experience to visiting such places is often monotonous. Most of the monuments are standing for centuries and museums are usually not regularly updated. Therefore, although they are always in tourist’s itinerary on account of new experience but for natives regular visits is quite often boring.
Another reason for infrequent visits by the locals is the cost. Most of the museums and historical places have entry fees which is often an issue in developing countries where majority earn just enough money to make the ends meet. Finally, most governments are busy focusing on science and technology which will bring bright future but this is being done at the cost of neglecting our glorious past. Due to this biased behavior by the authorities, people are loosing interest in museums and archaeological sites.
There are multiple simple solutions which can be taken by government to rekindle the interest. One way could be organizing regular events like exhibitions, inter – cultural events and light shows which can provide natives a varied experience every time they visit the site. Another step could be scrapping the entry fees so that everyone can visit them. Finally , the local authorities should aggressively advertise museums and monuments so that it engross the locals.
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people to visit these places? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34716981132 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7147036509 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0420301574 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30535787597 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101407521341 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787967782764 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180431218766 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397639468347 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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