Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In many cities, traffic and accommodation problems are getting severe. That is why many people have an opinion that government should motivate some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. This essay summarizes a few advantages and disadvantages to this initiative. The essay first highlights two advantages like reduced pollution and lower housing cost in the city.
The disadvantage can be lacks of skilled people
The first one could easily find out that is reduced of different types of pollution. If the business moves from city to rustic area, certainly, there should less amount of pollution. For instance, a renowned health organization found that if 20% polluted business move from urban to a rural place, then there are 35% chances that air pollution will likely to be less. In addition, housing
cost will also be lowered. As more people move from one place to another, there are more likely chances that the housing cost will be lessened.
Despite the above-mentioned advantages, there would be a particular disadvantage that no one can ignore is that lack of skilled people. The business will be a little bit tremble position if they do not find the required skilled people as they needed. For instance, a private buying house reported that, if they move their factory from city to remote urban place, then will be a shortage of lower-level skilled worker. That is why many businesses do not want to move
To sum up, if the business could take a proper strategy to counter the disadvantage, then the advantages
outweigh the disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... skilled people. The business will be a little bit tremble position if they do not find th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06177606178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77744956478 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521235521236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4094429178 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30931553988 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108181253916 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960615307119 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131722003565 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097166944025 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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