TV is widely used by people all around the world. This device has some negative effects that need to be resolved.
Do you agree?
Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Ever since its invention television has been playing the central role in our daily lives. however, there are some detrimental effects which require to be rectified.
The staggering rise in the popularity of this device is heavily associated with two factors. Firstly, the ease of its usage has made it compelling to people of all ages. We witness children as young as 2 years old turn on, change channels or even utilize more advanced capabilities of the TV. Secondly, the vastness of program choices presented can satisfy nearly all tastes. Not long ago, the number of broadcasting channels worldwide would not have surpassed a hundred stations whereas now we have over twenty thousand audiovisual stations with Global coverage.
There are numerous adverse effects created by television. one of the most obvious, as well as threatening counts, has to be obesity. Although the issue has become a bit of a cliché, there is no significant progress toward resolving it. As a tangible example, child obesity is at its highest rate which can be traced to binge-watching TV as a primary factor. Moreover, psychological disorders are known to be induced as a result of over-exposure to television. Programs are filled with violence which can potentially shape violent and behaviors in the audience. Statistics demonstrate that the audience of violent content tends to get aggravated easily and are more violent.
In order to, effectively alleviate the situation, various methods are known to be employed this one is to try substituting TV watching with other constructive hobbies, such as Sport or camping. Not only the transition will provide a physical boost, but it is also proven to have positive effects on mental well-being. Another widely used method is to restrict hours that one can watch television. The parental control can be issued to limit the exposure of children. This will free their previously wasted time to be spent more beneficially.
To conclude, given that TV has a relative dominance in our lifestyle, as well as acknowledge negative side effects, it seems crucial that measures have to be taken to remedy the situation. Picking up sports and limiting the time spent are namely the two proposed methods of resolving the negative side effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17663043478 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89699785736 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7527191643 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126900370891 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359617016447 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279632011994 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667696333039 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194333396905 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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