Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree。
Admission to Schools or college for boys and girls in equal proportion has always been a concern for the developing nations like India. Percentage criteria for the admission of boys and girls must be equal in universities. In this essay, we will discuss the aspects of admission of boys and girls in university curriculum and the outcome of this.
Chance of competition and opportunity should be same for everyone. We are living in the 21st century, still, some countries do not promote the girl education in a serious way. Which results in no gender competition and represents the monopoly of boys in the development arena. Hence, girls remain incompetent. There are various fields girls are required more in demand as compare to boys. There are ample of an instance, such as in medical field the requirement of gynaecologist as a female entity is more as compared to boys. In the developed nations, various private and government organizations are trying to minimize the gender gap to provide the equal platform for everyone to compete and break the monopoly.
Furthermore, it also allows an individual to learn and become self-dependent. Take an example, in India, the cases of rapes and other brutal crimes on girls can be minimized by educating them and making girls self-dependent.
Thus, start from the base, the study of both the genders in equal proportion is important and needed for the betterment of the society in various fields. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the above-mentioned statement and strongly advised to every individual to understand the necessity of education for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, so, still, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11742424242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98094027711 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0567675696 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930150739163 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298182540413 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025006001742 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532513845706 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360841064356 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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