Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, there is huge variety of subjects available that one can choose for his career and future development. However, it is a proposed plan that universities should allocate equal number of seats for both the genders for every subjects. I completely agree with this thought and this essay will present supportive statements for my agreement.
To begin with, same number of boys and girls candidates in each subject highly reflects that the course is not gender specific. Gone are the days when subjects were chosen based on gender of the student. For example, In earlier days, tailoring, cooking courses were mainly considered more by girl's students and chemical and mechanical engineering were preferred as boy's best-loved courses. Equal number of boys and girls will bring confidence to students to study subjects of their interest, which they could not learn if the majority of students is opposite sex.
Along with that, this trend of equal number of male and female students for every course will provide better opportunities to students. Children could choose from wide variety of subjects and choose their course on the basis of interest. Nowadays, we could find girls in space projects, driving and boys could be seen giving cookery classes and there are various well known fashion designers who are male, this could be possible only if they have equal opportunities irrespective of their gender.
To conclude, this is a very nice thought that universities should accept equal number of boys and girls for every course. I completely agree with this plan as this will remove the gender barrier from the course choice and will offer equal opportunities to both boys and girls. Further, there will give students a broader scope of areas or fields to choose as a career choice and hence the rate of success will also accelerate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11881188119 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53500581984 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6050385882 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240461486629 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971939219309 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778707619788 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149525413397 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00791105899455 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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