Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
Do you agree or disagree?
In modern societies the number of time children spend surfing the internet have increased. computers are one of the major technological device used around the globe. it is present in our homes, schools and working environment. children who used the computer daily are exposed to a wide Range of information that can help them academically, socially and professionally. Despite these benefits some people argues that if children over used the internment the results can be quite damaging.
children who spend quality time on the internment are exposed to a huge amount of information that can help them to improve their grades and complete research. For example, while attending college almost everyone had a laptop to store information, and search for answers to questions that were very complicated. theses student preformed better on exams because they became independent learners. Without the help of teachers they are motivated to use the internet to gain the information, as a result they retain more that if they were taught.
also, the internet is used as a medium for communication, as social network such as twitter and Facebook are great ways for children and teenagers to communicate and express their feelings to friends and relatives. this alternatively help them to communicate better. Further more, children are developing life long skills that are necessary for the job market. most companies, requires that employees are computer literate, and spend thousands of dollars training their staff, so when they are filling vacancies they employ those who are already computer literate. therefore, parents who allow their child or children to surf the internet on a daily basis are helping them to develop critical skills.
On the other hand, there are long term effects that are associated with over use of the internet. these problem includes health issues like obesity, which can develop when children become addictive to the computer and decrease their outdoors activities. Moreover, this can also lead to antisocial behaviour. if children spent too much time using the internet and less time acquiring skills necessary for social interaction they can find it difficult to communicate appropriately. The most damaging aspect of spending too much time online, is the use of phonographic materials that can devalue the values parents are trying to instill in their children. these websites are everywhere online, even if your child is on an educational sight they can pop up there as well ,and trying to close the site won't work, as they open automatically. Due to this the internet can be considered as unsafe for children.
Overall, in my view, using the internet on a daily basis have both pros and cons, that are of equal important to young people. therefore, parents need to have rules as to which site their children visit and the amount of time they spend online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Computers
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...nological device used around the globe. it is present in our homes, schools and wo...
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Suggestion: Children
...homes, schools and working environment. children who used the computer daily are exposed...
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Suggestion: Children
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 468.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18803418803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74676308212 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517094017094 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1352877335 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.565217391 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204266858774 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06488685693 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039882229532 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128506935318 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500074137635 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.