In recent years, there have been some controversies about safety of vaccine. This has led to the suggestion that whether we should take children to receive vaccines against preventable disease. Some people think is unnecessary to do it and the safety of vaccine can’t be ensured. I don't agree their opinion.
First, it is necessary to take your child to receive vaccines. As an adult, you need to take responsibility not only for your children but also the society. If your child get the disease because of he didn't receive vaccines, he will spread the disease to someone else, may be his classmates his friends even yourself. The whole city will be devastated by diseases, but if all of us can realize the importance of the vaccine, we can prevent it easily. So it is necessary to take our child receive vaccine.
In addition, the safety of vaccine can be ensured. We don't need to worry about that. Vaccines are under strict trials and examination. Only vaccines which pass the examination can be used to our children, so the safety of vaccines is completely good. Which more important is we need to go the licensed hospitals, so that we won’t by vaccinated by fake vaccines.
In conclusion, it is ridiculous to deny receiving vaccines. Vaccinating is necessary and safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84474885845 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79325186828 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1950176725 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3125 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210372735661 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658614289139 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626033860503 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11708971589 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465432526958 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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