Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular. Why is this? What effect does that have on society?
There are some people recently exciting to watch criminal films more than that old days. That trend effects in the communities. This essay will discuss the reasons of spreading this type of movies and the effects of watching this kind of entertainment.
Firstly, the pressure of our modern life force the persons to be always under stresses. The audiences use the crime movies to escape from real life to parallel world movies. In addition, the effects of the graphic and sound development which are improved latterly lead viewers to stupendous atmosphere. In fact, in the past the family used to watch romantic series and they were very interesting with it. Finally, the numbers of applications which are display and present that type of shows used to available and popular. For example, when the viewer want to watch something to relief himself, he has a wide varieties of crime films.
On the other hand, there are numerous effects to watch this sort of films also appear in the street. For example, the increasing of fighting or armed robbery in our cities is the result of publishing the criminal TV shows. Moreover the decreasing of useful activities such as sports and entertainment are the main factor to magnetise that trend of movies.
In conclusion, watching criminal T.V show or movies become common and continually growing and we have two options according to information above. Either we accept that nor try to make control by making pressure on the move makers to change this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5910814487 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5878837718 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264769994205 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731074181472 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571124960985 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143960028668 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605798734023 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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