Presence of computers can be seen in almost all walks of life. Despite them making their mark just a few decades ago, they have now made us highly reliant on them. This essay will look at some of the possible uses of computers in the foreseeable future, followed by an illustration of how this dependency will be highly beneficial for our society.
Future of computing world seems to be heading towards making them smarter than humans. Using artificial intelligence, modern computers are able to take independent decisions. For instance, the auto-pilot mode of airlines is a fine example of this. Thus, in the future, the computer is going to have their own brain like us and make decisions on our behalf. It is very likely that future computers would be able to predict our mood, by analyzing our past actions, and even prepare our meals without our requests. In short, future computers will dictate how we lead our lives.
Although it sounds a little scary that a machine could be more intelligent than a man, however, I believe it will be for the benefit of mankind. Firstly, computers being free of emotions, they will never make a rash decision. Every choice made by them is going to be well calculated by running several iterations of their logic to find the best option. This is very similar to how modern computers suggest the best route on a map, whereas a human can only think of some known paths. Finally, as computers are designed by us, their control will always remain in our hands. In case of any problem, turning off a switch merely takes a second, thus there is nothing major to worry about.
In conclusion, our dependency on computers will rise further into the future, as computers become more intelligent. It is predicted that the future computing world will not only be taking our decisions, but it will also carry out all our daily tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75384615385 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5261444767 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7517663751 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8823529412 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24643586191 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845214976435 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557862891629 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165668653012 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175127290587 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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